and so begins the Rending Trilogy: A RWBY Fanfiction... Seriously, though, you should read that story on fanfiction.net if you haven't. (The cloak placement is suspiciously similar to those on the characters after Ruby's death in the fic. If on purpose, good job. If not, are you psychic?)
Holy. Fucking. SHIT. Way to pull at your heartstrings. No scratch that. That chapter took your heart (feels included) ripped it apart, sewed it back together, impaled it and set it on fire. How do you find shit like this?!
Dear god... Mr friend sitting here with me has never seen RWBY, but after a minute long explanation of the show and a few of the ships, they were literally in tears over this. The feels are strong with this one, fantastic work.
Yuki(OC): *Slaps Yang* Get it together! I know how you feel. I feel the same way. But you have to accept the fact that Ruby's gone and she's not coming back! She died for us didn't she?! What's the point of her sacrifice if you're just gonna sit here and deny what happened?! What did she die for?! She gave you another chance! Don't waste it by crying in a corner! What would Ruby say if she saw you like this?
Ya know, I'm getting the feeling that not many people like Ruby. I mean, the whole 'Red Stained' theme is baised on Ruby dying and her cloak is torn and distributed to the remainder of team RWBY, it hits me with the feels hammer every time. Regardless, it's very well drawn.