and so begins the Rending Trilogy: A RWBY Fanfiction... Seriously, though, you should read that story on fanfiction.net if you haven't. (The cloak placement is suspiciously similar to those on the characters after Ruby's death in the fic. If on purpose, good job. If not, are you psychic?)
Dear god... Mr friend sitting here with me has never seen RWBY, but after a minute long explanation of the show and a few of the ships, they were literally in tears over this. The feels are strong with this one, fantastic work.